Walking down the cold sidewalk,
you see people hurt mentally and physically and there is no way to help them,
you hear their cry, but cannot answer them,
you run towards them to make their life a new,
but by the time you get to them they are gone,
you feel a tingle on your shoulder and realize its raining,
you keep walking in the poring raining waiting for someone to help you,
you realize that you are starting to become the people you tried to save,
there no way out of this life, but you don't believe that,
you run around trying to reach the ones you love with no answer or remorse,
and eventually you realize that this tormenting life has no end and it continues on in agony for all eternity,
that the pain will never stop,
the rain will continue to poor,
and the agonizing life that you've created for yourself will never end,
but continue on until someone crosses the road like you did to try and save someone from this agonizing life,
a guardian angel taking you to the great white light of night.
Walking
down
the
cold
sidewalk,
you
see
people
hurt
mentally
and
physically
and
there
is
no
way
to
help
them,
you
hear
their
cry,
but
cannot
answer
them,
you
run
towards
them
to
make
their
life
a
new,
but by the time you get to them they are gone, you feel a tingle on your shoulder and realize its raining, you keep walking in the poring raining waiting for someone to help you,
you realize that you are starting to become the people you tried to save, there no way out of this life,
but you
don't believe that, you run around trying to reach the ones you love with no answer or remorse, and
eventually you realize that this tormenting life has no end and it continues on in agony for all eternity,
That the
pain will never stop, the rain will continue to poor, and the agonizing life that you've created for yourself will never end, But continue on until someone crosses the road like you did to try and save someone from this agonizing life, a guardian angel taking you to the great white light of night.
Explanation:
My image is the words falling down like rain onto the cold streets which are described in my poem. It tells the story of a person who wishes to help, and gets that chance but is forced to take the place of the person he saved and must wait for someone else to take their place. The character try's to reach out to the ones they loved and the people that they thought loved them and realize that no one will take their place because the life they are going to live is a life of agony and sadness that no one wants to live.
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